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Half Lit II

"Half Lit II"
16" x 20"
Oil on RayMar Canvas

A while back I attempted a painting of the liquor store and neon clown that advertises Circus Liquor, a store in the middle of the San Fernando Valley.  (See previous painting HERE.) I liked what I had done, but I wasn't really satisfied with it and decided to try it again.

I painted a slightly different view and made it larger.  My goal was to keep the interesting sky but enhance it a bit with really thick paint (see detail) and to try to better achieve the look of evening descending with lights shining out from the liquor store and the buildings behind.  I'm still not sure whether I should further darken the foreground areas..... or add more paint to the sky areas.   Does anyone have an opinion???

As before, I liked the idea that the iconic clown sign was only partially fun

6 Responses to Half Lit II

Marsha Robinett
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Marian, I really enjoyed this painting and agree...much more interesting composition. I love the name...'Half Lit' works for the intoxicated and the painting! Well done.
Dad
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I liked it before and even more now. I think the sky, the store and the foreground are perfect. The half lit clown needs a bit better definition to better depict what neon is lit and what isn't. Perhaps the red in the drum
should be a tiny bit brighter and the unlit tubes slightly more visible.It's a very nice painting with a clever title. It brings a smile to your face as you think of the several meanings. Love, Dad
Marian Fortunati
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Marsha!!!
How ARE you??? I was worried about you!.. Thanks for dropping by my blog and especially for the comments. It's so nice hearing from you!!
Marian Fortunati
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Hi Daddy..
Yeah... I've already begun to make a few changes... Think it looks better... I liked it before, but I think it's better now.

Congratulations on your newest award!! You're my idol and you always have been. Love youl
mary maxam
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This has a wonderful mood to it. I love the sky detail, even as it's own little painting, no more paint needed....super work as always .......mary
Marian Fortunati
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Thanks, Mary...
I continue to fool with it.... Hoping that I'll finally be "totally" happy with it...
(Is that even possible???)
Actually I'm relatively happy with it... especially since architecture AND night / evening city scenes are new to my "repertoire".

Thanks again for dropping by and commenting... I so LOVED visiting your work... gorgeous!!








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